Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

man so sad to hear, Lrod is part of my important developmental years AND THEN SOME. he's the guy who helped me meet all the great poets I "met" here through their poetry.

*snaps*

Fall is a burlesque show isn't it!

ah I love your writting too. Just finished commenting on Perdida's and I just want to say that your work and her work i really look up to. I think you are talented. in that way that "talented" people don't get you know...true to something ineffable!

sweet! I've been looking for you perdida.

and I haven't been dissapointed, as usual your work seems to fit in so perfectly with how i see things, and things that are happening to me at the moment.

awesome writting, as always i love your stuff!

your probably not but still
but still I will wait for a maybe or sometime
or I don’t know.

Your niceities send me to hostility
I will take advantage so take care sweetness
Oh I don’t know

Ill go along for the ride but really
Take me anywhere but home
Its nothing unknown

And yet I’m here ...

I can no longer look much less leer.
I’ve bared the sight of your likeness
More then drowned in your lateness

I’m ready to be on your payroll
Eager to impress, often over dressed.

Your wanton ways are warring
On my thinly grained patience
The only thing left feigning

Don’t play with my hair ...

I've been there. Yes victory...but sometimes its meant to be a moment perhaps, a gradual change will reveal itself latter.

P.S- where have you been...feels like we haven't heard from you up untill recently, am i wrong?

I like it because it seems empowering and yet self depricating in a humorous way too.

GO EGO GO and "from foolish consistency" i can relate to! a little rhyme for hest.

gawhh awesome, no no killer. Yeah killer. Man I wish i could write like this. its def your style const.

I am not yours anymore
So don’t call me when your bored
Its no longer a mystery nor courtly
So don’t kiss me.

A creature of folklore
I’ve envisioned your likeness more
Often then your lateness.

I’ll be smitten never smitted
I’m on your side be on mine.

Hear dat! *bump. (page bump, not like a hand bump, chest bump or sexual bump-not sure if those under 25 know what a bump is-just making sure there isn't any confusion)

more latter on your poem not vernacular.

I something you
It started with a piercing on a smile.
I hope your listening next time we lie
And I try to push through “I love you”
Between kisses and lost pauses in your eyes.

I something you
From your fingers to your legs
Every touch is like its own date
And I want more time to get to know ...

I will check them out then.

I thought as Yejun (sp) did....that you got a good "grasp: of me at the part about "double xed, razor sharp...." I also in addition thought this one could be kind of similar to the last one you wrote...the other one on the board right now.

I think it works well towards the end not just caus of all ...

I hope it makes sense- I mean i thought it did now i'm re-reading it and I'm like what the fuck does it just sound like a string of words.

this poem, i thought i'd try to make myself not the hero...I mean i'm not always the good guy....maybe it could be lengthened?

:wink:

I don't know you ...