It's a good thing to be psyched
Radiant Aura
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- April 29th, 2015, 11:39 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: I'm psyched!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1105
Re: timing
I like the lines
"timing...
that's the puzzle piece,
gotta fit or else,
or else something."
Intriguing.
"timing...
that's the puzzle piece,
gotta fit or else,
or else something."
Intriguing.
- April 29th, 2015, 1:16 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: A place of peace ...
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1495
Re: A place of peace ...
Art and peace.
- April 27th, 2015, 7:29 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: storyteller
- Replies: 3
- Views: 723
Re: storyteller
Truth does have its variations while at the same time being exactly what it is. Perspective plays a huge part in it too. Good and insightful.
- April 27th, 2015, 12:37 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: What are you listening to?
- Replies: 28
- Views: 5764
Re: What are you listening to?
My friend's electronic mix
- April 27th, 2015, 12:27 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: general observation
- Replies: 28
- Views: 4803
Re: general observation
I agree that it is a bit narcissistic to get feedback on a poem but not reply to others.
- April 27th, 2015, 12:24 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: traversing my mind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1424
Re: traversing my mind
Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
- April 27th, 2015, 12:19 am
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Survival (Version 2)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 510
Re: Survival (Version 2)
limbs dangle below smog
from ivory cracks
spanned across the earth
sleepy time lines
examine a coated sea
items tossed into waves;
parchment and water bottles
used long ago
swallows on telephone wires
listen for unfolding years
regarding my only chance
of survival
from ivory cracks
spanned across the earth
sleepy time lines
examine a coated sea
items tossed into waves;
parchment and water bottles
used long ago
swallows on telephone wires
listen for unfolding years
regarding my only chance
of survival
- April 26th, 2015, 11:57 pm
- Forum: Rant, Rage & Laugh
- Topic: Writer's Block
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1453
Re: Writer's Block
Yes, that's funny.
- April 26th, 2015, 11:52 pm
- Forum: Paintings & Drawings
- Topic: Handz 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 876
Re: Handz 2
Realistic - good form.
- April 26th, 2015, 11:50 pm
- Forum: Paintings & Drawings
- Topic: Redemption
- Replies: 3
- Views: 986
Re: Redemption
I get a Van Gogh feeling too. He was a cool guy...
- April 26th, 2015, 11:48 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Dawns Song
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1156
Re: Dawns Song
Some of the images in this are pretty good. I like the idea of stars being restless. Punchy piece.
- April 26th, 2015, 11:42 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Survival (Version 2)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 510
Re: Survival (Version 2)
OK. I believe your revision is going in a positive direction. That said, I'm still unsure what this piece is really attempting to convey. Perhaps "something lost in the past" that N is trying to determine or recall? A bit diffusive and relatively abstract. Played around a bit based on my take: limb...
- April 26th, 2015, 8:21 pm
- Forum: Poetry
- Topic: Survival (Version 2)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 510
Survival (Version 2)
boughs dangle below smog whittled out of an ivory atmosphere skewed across the earth as muffled time lines i examine a jetty sea for items tossed into waves - parchment and ancient water bottles used by jaded stragglers swallows on telephone wires listen for the sound of unfolding years that signify...
Re: Survival
I did a version 2, because you're right that some parts could be expanded upon. A few folks have said that version 2 is more in depth and comes across as more personal. boughs dangle below smog whittled out of an ivory atmosphere skewed across the earth as muffled time lines i examine a jetty sea fo...