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by Rodak
February 8th, 2016, 6:58 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The First Commandment
Replies: 5
Views: 806

Re: The First Commandment

leafsailors ghost wrote:Crazy fine ..YES!
Thanks!
by Rodak
February 8th, 2016, 6:58 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The First Commandment
Replies: 5
Views: 806

Re: The First Commandment

WIREMAN wrote:...did u partake of the forbidden fruit?.....excellent poem 8)
I plead the Fifth.
by Rodak
February 7th, 2016, 10:54 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The First Commandment
Replies: 5
Views: 806

The First Commandment

I watched the arc
of her bare foot
as she sighed
that special note
and shifted her position
on the seat
of the straight back chair.

Something like a wet rose
(( flashed ))
a silent summons.

Adam naked I obeyed.

On my knees I walked
toward that gateless garden
impressed by an unspoken word ...

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