Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

we smiled at our familiar so sure of ourselves sitting in early summer face to face around a wobbly glass-frosted table top we found comfort in cigarettes she knew i always had to have one when with her i knew she’d join me and through puffs of wanting i sat in secret sipping sin lapping up the lapi...

I enjoy a good Villanelle, and this is most definitely a good Villanelle....I recognise the format and the talent behind it... but i'm a dumb-ass in writing one

enjoyed Joel

Perdida

"take slowest leave of you, that when we’re free
we’d had good chance to honor love’s good-bye"?

I echo Ann, seperating with pleasant feelings can't hurt anyone.

Enjoying your classic style of writing.

Perdida

all i can say at the moment is...What an AWESOME poem.....

Looking forward to reading more of you Joel.

Perdida

"you rubbed the lamp
& wished
to forget it all "

If only it was that easy...

Nice work ~K
a pleasure to read you....

perdida

Thank you for the warm welcome Doreen, Ann and Judih....

can't wait to get started.

Perdida.

Hi all, Doreen Peri invited me along to share with you all, I can't wait to explore and read the talent created here.

Cheers

Perdida

p.s. Hopefully i've submitted this in the right forum