On Eternity's Trail (New! With Song)

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On Eternity's Trail (New! With Song)

Post by Lightning Rod » December 31st, 2009, 1:45 pm

You've read the poem, now listen to the song!
Temporary Texas

On The Trail of Eternity

I called my estate Temporary, Texas
barbed wire was illegal there
but the place was protected by barbed wire
and paradox, ephemeral shadow of the dove

I wasn't afraid to invest in the temporary
to love, to love knowing
knowing all the while that the object of my love
the person, place or nation
the ideal or creed or livelihood,
all sentiment, sensation
would vanish, be stolen by time

a tent was temple to my religion
time and rent the devils of my panoply
the mantra, chant, the litany: "It Comes and Goes.
It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm"

God watches his body decay like an echo
if anything is eternal, infinite
it is God's threshold of pain
mountains crumble, oceans drain
the universe a sore against the grain
time before and time again
It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm

Meanwhile back in Temporary, Texas
the sheriff sucks the smoke from the barrel of his gun
time is the outlaw, no jail can hold him.
He nails a poster to a tree
it says, "WANTED--ETERNITY."

It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm
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Post by mtmynd » December 31st, 2009, 5:10 pm

God watches his body decay like an echo
if anything is eternal, infinite
it is God's threshold of pain


these lines moved me into
tantric tantrums of thought,
where an echo is the only way out.

good pome, especially coming from Temporary.
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Post by creativesoul » January 1st, 2010, 6:40 pm

So colorful are the parts of your people you write about. It always feels like I went somewhere. Other lives? Who knows, but good stuff!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by mnaz » January 1st, 2010, 7:11 pm

true. all is stolen by time.

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Post by Lightning Rod » January 12th, 2010, 6:45 am

Barry Gremillion got inspired by this poem and turned it into a song. Sounds like this:

Temporary Texas
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Post by creativesoul » January 12th, 2010, 7:52 am

Poems and songs are like hands that reach for each other in a dark theater
popcorn, and a vision dancing before my eyes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by Lightning Rod » January 25th, 2010, 2:52 pm

thanks for listening, CS

yes, you put it aptly:
'hands that reach for each other in a dark theater'
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Post by stilltrucking » January 25th, 2010, 3:04 pm

I likes it more every time I have re-reads it.

This bit here was the crux of it for me.
time is the outlaw, no jail can hold him.
He nails a poster to a tree
it says, "WANTED--ETERNITY."

It Comes and Goes, It Comes and Goes. Rama Jah Ohm
Reminded me of this bit.

"I regain space. Time is useless without space."—Mnaz

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Post by creativesoul » January 25th, 2010, 9:56 pm

Seems like I am looking through a window
one world complimenting another
light dancing in the future
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by stilltrucking » January 26th, 2010, 9:30 am

I want to listen to it but something screwed up on my computer won't let me.

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