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Honoring Constantine Pantazonis - RIP 6/16/14
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To honor our site members who are no longer with us.
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constantine
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Post by constantine » March 21st, 2008, 8:53 pm

yellow touches the blue horse
green grass, moist to savor
buck and gallop, run
the northern steppe
to the valley of shards and prisms
no iron bites -
no taste of leather,
yellow touches the blue horse
blue horse without a rider

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Post by westcoast » March 21st, 2008, 10:05 pm

i love it :) it's a joy to read and to speak out loud.

~westcoast

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Post by Arcadia » March 22nd, 2008, 10:24 am

first the sounds
then the colors
then the savor

(chronology of my reception :wink: !)

great poem!!!!!! :)

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Post by constantine » March 22nd, 2008, 10:35 am

thank you arcadia and westie.

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