Page 1 of 1

Thalia

Posted: January 28th, 2011, 7:28 pm
by constantine
Have you ever met Thalia?
Surely you would know it if you had.
She dwells within the giggle and tease
of a schoolgirl's eye, and
the whispering wink of a boy.
Her smile is as light and fleeting
as a dryad's step; her escapades
leave both centaur and satyr in her wake,
blinded by the glint, like the rippling and liquid
swimming radiance of silver-heeled Thetis.
With lips dreamy and red as the poppy,
flowering within your consciousness
to skip like a stone, flung
upon the watery vastness,
glittering minnows
darting in and about
the lace and lattice of flora, spun
like the song of Sirens, to baffle and entice
the fisherman, net for net...
and even in the throes of dark and implacable gloom
she hides,
within the nervous laugh of rebellious sorrow.
Have you ever met Thalia?

Re: Thalia

Posted: January 28th, 2011, 9:09 pm
by saw
lush language and images, built for speed.........I sailed through it and immediately did it 2 more times.....its got pace and excitement......can't go wrong !

Re: Thalia

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 12:12 am
by judih
roaring 20s flapper meets legendary myth

Re: Thalia

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 8:41 am
by Sue Littleton
I have searched for Thalia, I have found her, I have been Thalia. Lucky me! Thank you for drawing me into this classically beautiful poem. ♥♥♥

Re: Thalia

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 3:00 pm
by joel
...only in passing...mostly at parties where I haven't felt cool enough to participate...never caught her name, but might introduce myself more boldly next time....

Re: Thalia

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 4:08 pm
by constantine
thanks comrades for your kind remarks

Re: Thalia

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 4:20 pm
by dadio
impressive poem.

flowering within your consciousness
to skip like a stone, flung
upon the watery vastness,
glittering minnows
darting in and about
the lace and lattice of flora,
( excellent lines) 8)

Re: Thalia

Posted: February 2nd, 2011, 10:50 pm
by Hollweg
Thalia – object
of my hearty perfervid
unrequited love.

Re: Thalia

Posted: January 17th, 2015, 5:44 pm
by Terri
I've always loved this one, know Dino did, too. Wonder if he ever did it at a reading? Not a show-stopper, light and gentle. Even here though, his Greek myth references bring the idea of inescapable fate (big Dino theme...)
baffle and entice
the fisherman, net for net...