Lazy Lizards Languishing

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Kailashana
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Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by Kailashana » August 11th, 2011, 11:29 am

1.

There were sailboats on Lake Erie,
the wind climbed into Sunday
like a vortex of poetry.

You and I were taking snapshots,
new memories to hold when the
moon is not close enough to break
into waves and the lake is
frozen to the touch, your glasses
fogging.

We missed the last of the blackberries
and raspberries, the scenery changes;
young thistles are purple around the edges,
golden rods wave with the breeze.
We brought home sand in our sandals and
the juiciest Ohio peaches you have ever tasted.

It was a full day of summer, we laughed like fools,
we soaked up the sun.

2.

I shot myself in the foot again,
used your arrows this time.
I took words from your mouth
and sucked them dry,
you tasted like New Jersey peaches

I gazed into the mirror long after my
image had fled, I found myself
rushing into a Dali landscape, washing
stones, freshwater fish and willow leaves
from my hair,
I was full of art, uncomplicated
by my finger pointing to the moon

I wrote a poem while you were sipping
Peruvian coffee, a tangle in red sheets,
four days after the golden gladiolas bloomed.

I, like a wounded gazelle, flee to what binds us.

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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by the mingo » August 11th, 2011, 1:40 pm

It's a full day of summer today. I came here and soaked this up and ....
smiled like a fool. 8) Thx, Kaila.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by dadio » August 11th, 2011, 3:23 pm

Very good capture and poem.

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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by Perdida » August 11th, 2011, 5:17 pm

Damn, i wish i had written this..... :D
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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by saw » August 12th, 2011, 9:41 am

a terrific effort, full of life and its details, its quirks, its foibles .....but I must know.....I'm totally intrigued by the difference in taste between an Ohio peach and a New Jersey peach.....despite all the good writing, my warped brain keeps focusing on this.....is it significant ?.......................enjoyed it...
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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by Kailashana » August 12th, 2011, 11:10 am

Ha! Caught me! My partner is from NJ, (I also lived there for a decade). Peaches, of course, shout SUMMER'S HERE, and the last peaches I found at the West Side Market that smelled like heaven (I always take the sniff test) were from NJ, the week before we were on an outing to one of my fav. places, an ice cream store, a barn in the back where peaches, apples (grown on the property) honey, blueberries, plums, honey (all grown on the property) are sold.

Good peaches are good, wherever they come from.

Thank you all for reading, your commentary and friendship. The quality of poetry here fills me. Delightful!

~A

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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by saw » August 12th, 2011, 2:58 pm

ah thanx for the explanation...nice to have you around the barnyard as well....
studio 8 is a friendly place to visit .....and stay for a spell........happy writing....
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Re: Lazy Lizards Languishing

Post by Kailashana » August 12th, 2011, 3:22 pm

Well, just don't get complacent, I'm not always nice. :lol:

~~Ac

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