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sonofthesun
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happy poetry

Post by sonofthesun » November 6th, 2013, 2:22 am

My happy poetry
I keep in my head
as each breath exhaled
is a celebration
another moment
I am able to hold,
expand upon,
and make my own
each thought I have
multiplies a million fold
built on each breath of all
that ever was
I am at your mercy as my own
There is no empty space

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dadio
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Re: happy poetry

Post by dadio » November 6th, 2013, 4:12 am

Very good.

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Re: happy poetry

Post by revolutionrabbit » November 6th, 2013, 3:24 pm

happy poetry kept in my head

right, it's the stuff we write that is kept on paper or hyperspace

and we really are at the mercy of every breath you take

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Re: happy poetry

Post by creativesoul » November 16th, 2013, 3:52 pm

you are tempting me? cannot keep it in my head- there is already a hood up there- gangs and shit-laughing
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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