roam sweet roam

Post by **mtmynd** » June 19th, 2007, 10:00 am

roam sweet roam

so much younger than the stars
but so brightly she did shine
on that eve of eclipsed thoughts
her eyes deep as cabernet's wine

shunned the passes like a juggler
the pieces of her puzzled looks
withdrew from fame and fortune
her appetites made jealous cooks

whet their passions streaming
as their lives dissolved on high
into fragrant mounds
that caused their breaths to sigh

miracles unleashed at last
from caverns never known
into the broad expanses
our mindlessness did roam.

Post by **Arcadia** » June 19th, 2007, 5:46 pm

beautiful, cecil!!!!

Post by **Lightning Rod** » June 19th, 2007, 10:47 pm

Arcadia wrote:beautiful, cecil!!!!

ditto

Post by **mtmynd** » June 20th, 2007, 12:53 am

arcadia y elRod... gracias... muchas gracias.

Post by **WIREMAN** » June 20th, 2007, 7:20 pm

life on the edge...on the fringe....of the milky way....beatific mtmynd at it's mas supreme-ooooooooo.............

Post by **Andeh** » June 20th, 2007, 9:32 pm

I love the way this flows

Post by **stilltrucking** » June 21st, 2007, 2:42 am

so much younger than the stars
but so brightly she did shine
on that eve of eclipsed thoughts
her eyes deep as cabernet's wine

thanks Cecil
I need all the reminders I can get
younger than the stars
so much time to roam

Post by **mnaz** » June 21st, 2007, 5:55 am

the first line put me so beautifully temporary.

Post by **hester_prynne** » June 23rd, 2007, 2:15 am

Fabulous read.....the kind that gives you something each time you re-read it...
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Post by **Perdida** » June 29th, 2007, 11:31 pm

Absolutely love this... enjoyed

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