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joel
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Post by joel » August 5th, 2007, 11:28 am

perhaps a last time
off, away, without, removed
like something special
superficial sweet veneer
darling, sweetheart, baby, dear
perhaps a last rhyme
before the valley
and its verdant layers
and shade by day
and darker shady nights
perhaps a last
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Post by hester_prynne » August 6th, 2007, 12:24 am

I like this.
I like reveries like this very much.

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