Swallered by a whale

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hester_prynne
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Swallered by a whale

Post by hester_prynne » May 23rd, 2008, 2:18 pm

Father victim,
Mother angry,
children begotton,
in drunken abandon,
left to bask,
in a lion's den,
or swallered by a whale,
whole.
I was the latter,
sorry for everyone,
hardest,
on myself.
It's a long haul,
to the bottom of the well,
of self loathing,
but now,
having arrived,
I'm free to look
up,
for the rest
of my days.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Lightning Rod » May 23rd, 2008, 5:04 pm

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Post by saw » May 23rd, 2008, 5:23 pm

I can't think of a healthier way to turn adversity into an asset ....
the only thing we have control over, is our attitude.....
well done, hester-p......

also...enjoyed the musical/ video clip...lightning rod...no words
were necessary

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Post by hester_prynne » May 23rd, 2008, 7:17 pm

Lrod! That video is amazing!!!!!!!I could watch it over and over again.
And Saw, thanky thanky....for readin me too....
Thanky to you both for your cool responses...always
H 8) .
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by mtmynd » May 23rd, 2008, 7:48 pm

"It's a long haul,
to the bottom of the well,
of self loathing,
but now,
having arrived,
I'm free to look
up,
for the rest
of my days.
"

a self-observation of the highest order...

me gusta, Hes'... from the soul.

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Post by westcoast » May 23rd, 2008, 9:28 pm

pure gold, hester. love your work :)

~westie

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whales

Post by the mingo » May 24th, 2008, 9:02 am

"Amen Bingo!"
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by constantine » May 24th, 2008, 11:06 am

beautifully done. the brevity of the lines gives it power and elegance.

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Post by Arcadia » May 25th, 2008, 10:59 am

I'm free to look
up,
for the rest
of my days.


hey, sounds good!!!!! :D (I´m not :roll: my eyes on purpose :wink: )

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