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more notes from the forefront

Post by mtmynd » May 23rd, 2008, 11:11 pm

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black B.L.A.C.K. black

white, white, white
white, white, white


RED!

white...black...white

black

black

bLLLack

WhiTe...wHItE

black - white - black

black-.w.h.i.t.e.-black

WHITE...white...BLACK...BLACK...white...WHITE

W.H.I.T.E.

(white)

black

<u>r.</u>E.<u>d</u>

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Post by mnaz » May 23rd, 2008, 11:21 pm

I'm leaning toward B.L.A.C.K., or at least H.T.M.L...

O.h m.y...

I'l.l g.e.t b.a.c.k t.o y.o.u.

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Post by saw » May 24th, 2008, 6:00 am

visually appealing...like a jazzed eye chart....

metaphorically, it could represent the racial tensions that still exist to some degree today, the red...bloodshed

in either case, it works.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by mtmynd » May 24th, 2008, 1:17 pm

thx, mnaz..! always good to see yr alive. :)

saw : "metaphorically, it could represent the racial tensions that still exist to some degree today, the red...bloodshed"

astute, saw. i had read yesterday's newsweek.com article -

http://www.newsweek.com/id/138456

... and thinking about the divide. it's said "not everything is black and white!" to which i wonder : "says who..?"

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Post by hester_prynne » May 24th, 2008, 1:21 pm

Indeed, jazzy eyescattin
dig that crazy beat...!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by WIREMAN » May 24th, 2008, 1:40 pm

forefront
full frontal
taal
tell tale
the front
ahead
all might be titles
but i like "red"

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Post by judih » May 24th, 2008, 2:05 pm

yeah, i'll take one in every colour
every day and every way
or i'll wear nuthin

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Post by mtmynd » May 24th, 2008, 6:11 pm

Hes'... wired... Judih... cool beans!

(there may be an note on the blues..?)

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