If'n U Move Me

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WIREMAN
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If'n U Move Me

Post by WIREMAN » May 24th, 2008, 1:56 pm

the rock will cry
bleed new tears
for an angular whirl
that teases
su-purr-licious was
the throw the
dog a bone
that's why we
ate at grace's diner
dave smoked his cigar
as molly sat in all
her golden splendor
we wore her hair
on our sweaters
this cool morn

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Post by mtmynd » May 24th, 2008, 5:48 pm

sounds like all is right in yr world, wired!

spill the word like it's the last!! :)

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Post by goldenmyst » May 24th, 2008, 10:29 pm

Wired I like the way your circuitry runs. The trip is mind bending and cathartic.

John

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Post by saw » May 25th, 2008, 1:05 pm

is molly a golden retriever, wireman ? love their cosmic personalities...
you paint a very laid back scene...reminded me of Alice's Restaurant...
"you can get anything you want...........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by WIREMAN » May 31st, 2008, 10:19 pm

molly is a golden.....as is my dog zorba....he's in baltimore w/carole jean....i'm coming manana steve....sometime let's get together on a sat. or sunday.....thanks for the nice comments john and cecil and you 2 saw man.

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