a book of art with a heart-the cover torn off

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no1special

a book of art with a heart-the cover torn off

Post by no1special » January 17th, 2011, 1:55 pm

my only addictions
my convictions
to express myself
to share my abilities
my creativity
I have plenty in me
so much so
it flows free
seeps from my pores

I'll share it
it's yours

if I can inspire
create in you a fire
that spreads higher
consuming the universe
things could have been worse

I could have allowed
the tragedies
in which my life was cursed
to suffocate the gift
that is
me

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dadio
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Re: a book of art with a heart-the cover torn off

Post by dadio » January 17th, 2011, 3:26 pm

Very good poem.

I could have allowed
the tragedies
in which my life was cursed
to suffocate the gift
that is
me.( I like these lines best.)

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Re: a book of art with a heart-the cover torn off

Post by weepingwillow » January 17th, 2011, 4:04 pm

"It could've been worse"

It can always be worse. Another poem from you that sits with me for awhile and makes me reflect and brings so much ink out of my pen.

no1special

Re: a book of art with a heart-the cover torn off

Post by no1special » January 17th, 2011, 4:34 pm

Thank you to both of you....I am an arsonist of unrest! Unknowingly you are the same!

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