finding yourself vs. founding yourself

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joel
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finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by joel » March 1st, 2011, 3:37 pm

Seek not to find yourself by thinking you’ll be found
Tomorrow – in a future – somewhere else than now,
But found your soul today with what you find is sound.

Itinerantly preaching, teaching, Jesus crowned
His own identity upon a holy vow:
Seek not to find yourself by thinking you’ll be found.

His doggèd “seek and ye shall find” is not your hound
Intent on taking treasure like a truffled sow—
But found your soul today with what you find is sound.

I loved a watch whose time was kept, though never wound
And never keyed: those skies I watched when time’d allow.
Seek not to find yourself by thinking you’ll be found

As if your cyclic walk would make your circle round,
Or produce more define your earth than does its plough,
But found your soul today with what you find is sound

And don’t betray what is for what might be profound;
Our best of acts are played and then we actors bow.
Seek not to find yourself by thinking you’ll be found,
But found your soul today with what you find is sound.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by Perdida » March 1st, 2011, 3:50 pm

Beautiful writing Joel, just what i needed to hear today. Thank you.

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Re: finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by saw » March 9th, 2011, 7:50 am

the wordplay and rhymes in the last stanza should be a poem unto itself

and don't betray what is for what might be profound
our best of acts are played and then we actors bow
seek not to find yourself by thinking you'll be found,
but found your soul today with what you find is sound

whimsical in sound, but solid in advice
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by Hollweg » March 9th, 2011, 2:51 pm

Good villanelle, Joel. "Doggèd" and "hound" in the same line is a nice touch.

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Re: finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by justwalt » March 10th, 2011, 10:53 am

I found a message, yesterday
that fit my position... which is
what you say here. Had to
read this again to be sure.

very nice


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Re: finding yourself vs. founding yourself

Post by joel » March 11th, 2011, 12:29 pm

justwalt wrote:bingo
...was his name-o.

Thanks, all.
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