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Kailashana
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Lunatic

Post by Kailashana » September 11th, 2011, 9:10 am

Fucking headache. Fucking genetic disposition.
Fucking wars, Sunday church bells, conspiracies
and conspiracy theories,
fucking bombs and white vans and blasphemy,
fucking death lurking around every corner, on the
110th floor or near a hovel in Bangladore
Cerberus is a damned dog and there's sons of bitches
everywhere,
the gates of hell are never guarded, but what the hell
let's fuck and make it all go away.

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the mingo
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Re: Lunatic

Post by the mingo » September 11th, 2011, 11:17 am

Bam! & Wow! & Fuck yeah, Mongolia :!: 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Lunatic

Post by creativesoul » September 11th, 2011, 1:05 pm

Yeah! That is something to write about! Good luck with that- nice write!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Lunatic

Post by stilltrucking » September 11th, 2011, 4:04 pm

maybe if we said no to fucking it would all go away
sooner or later

good poem I thought
thanks for writing it
don't mind this lunatic howling at the moon

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saw
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Re: Lunatic

Post by saw » September 11th, 2011, 6:26 pm

for me, there are many days when fucking is the only thing that makes any sense.
finally a poem that addresses this thing I have known for quite some time.....yes!
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Lunatic

Post by revolutionrabbit » September 13th, 2011, 4:31 am

my 60's novel ends with fucking on LSD
back then it was all like going on a trip
and hoping you will end the trip
getting laid, the whole trip is a journey
to arrive at that innocent moment
of fucking the girl you tripped with
when she was 13 years old, along
the way you meet a lot of other sexy
creatures, that teach you about tripping
and teach you about your first love making.

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Re: Lunatic

Post by wesley snow » September 20th, 2011, 5:29 pm

Goodness Kaila.
Now that is what I call a rant.
Surprised to see me here? Doreen invited me. Blame her.
I think I liked the poem, but I'm going to have to settle down first to know.
wesley

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