falling into fall

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saw
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falling into fall

Post by saw » November 5th, 2013, 10:25 am

drinking that Harford roast
in the treehouse again, those
young pit bulls
are tryin' to drown out my mellow

as well as my clanging wind chimes,
but I reset my chakra
to hear Stravinsky,
push my ballpoint deeper

into the yellow pad,
smell wood-fire from down
the street, wafting serpentine air
flows into another sensibility

the colors of autumn such teases,
those mid- Atlantic sirens
their temptation choreography
is no competition

for the small voices of little dogs
starving for attention,
no, puppies are only white noise,
the dancers of November

are brush fires of endless pastel palettes
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

mtmynd
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Re: falling into fall

Post by mtmynd » November 5th, 2013, 1:48 pm

a swell read, saw... worthy of rereading more than once.

gracias.
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dadio
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Re: falling into fall

Post by dadio » November 6th, 2013, 4:14 am

I can picture it, smell things, hear the mutts. Fine poem 8)

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