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old farm

Posted: December 28th, 2013, 5:04 pm
by creativesoul
magic turns old farm
into new farm
the current is electric
now- we need these things-
tractor
new lawn mower
ranch hand
leather gloves
shovel
rake
no harm intended
this is for all of us
greenhouse mist
insists
that we grow food
filling with love

the land and hands
full of dirt
broken fingernails
muscles tight
brown in the sun
salads are really
way more fun
it is right
this life of green

Re: old farm

Posted: December 28th, 2013, 8:29 pm
by constantine
i like this. its honest simplicity - its warm matter of factness - is perfect for what you convey.

Re: old farm

Posted: December 28th, 2013, 9:33 pm
by creativesoul
Thank you- very kind! Never sure what " the correct response" is...

Re: old farm

Posted: December 29th, 2013, 10:57 am
by the mingo
8)

Re: old farm

Posted: December 30th, 2013, 1:29 pm
by creativesoul
The new girl

Re: old farm

Posted: December 31st, 2013, 4:40 am
by dadio
Very good down to earth poem.

Re: old farm

Posted: December 31st, 2013, 9:15 am
by creativesoul
where did your lil picture go? and how do you do that?thanx :idea: