traversing my mind

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traversing my mind

Post by wylde » April 23rd, 2015, 8:46 am

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you lace your dress
a cross, akimbo
traversing my mind
drawing me inwards
as you hold; dancing glances askance
with the i of your consciousness
reflecting me in what i wade

out into sea

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Post by Wayne R Baker » April 23rd, 2015, 10:31 am

Been missing your writs bro.
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by WIREMAN » April 23rd, 2015, 6:50 pm

i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo.... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by wylde » April 24th, 2015, 3:39 am

Wayne R Baker wrote:Been missing your writs bro.

wayne - thanks bro. sincerely appreciate the compliment.
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Post by wylde » April 24th, 2015, 3:49 am

WIREMAN wrote:i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo.... 8)
you lucky fish on a bicycle! akimbo is one hell of a dancing contortion.

thanks wire man.
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by saw » April 24th, 2015, 7:55 am

succinct and lush
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by fuchsiafestival! » April 27th, 2015, 12:24 am

Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by wylde » April 28th, 2015, 3:46 am

saw wrote:succinct and lush
saw - thanks for the read; seeing & feeling of it. appreciate all 3 of those aspects.
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by wylde » April 28th, 2015, 3:48 am

fuchsiafestival! wrote:Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
sistersun -thank you; and thanks for being re-nourished...


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Re: traversing my mind

Post by justwalt » April 28th, 2015, 11:40 pm

I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
kosher
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Re: traversing my mind

Post by wylde » April 30th, 2015, 5:22 am

justwalt wrote:I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
kosher

Thanks Walt! the w3rd is gaudy tinsel, so that would be the perfect accompaniment...


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