ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
Kailashana
Posts: 466
Joined: August 4th, 2011, 1:52 pm

ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 8:50 am

lemon blossoms
lemon yellow
lemon tree
its art dangling
remembered
jonquils and
tulips, buttercups
and roses,
its curve of space
breaking light

breaking into seas,
into fear, into the
first rung on Jacob's Ladder,
reaching far above the clouds
into giant's hands
and
_____________________________________
standing on their shoulders !
Last edited by Kailashana on September 18th, 2015, 12:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.

saw
Posts: 8343
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by saw » September 18th, 2015, 12:10 pm

jack's beanstalk
his golden eggs
why didn't he just use the ladder
Anna Ruiz ?
maybe it was too cloudy that day ?
and who is Jacob
Jack's little brother ?
curvy space is awesome... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Kailashana
Posts: 466
Joined: August 4th, 2011, 1:52 pm

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 12:42 pm

How, some information is just too much, eh?

Kailashana
Posts: 466
Joined: August 4th, 2011, 1:52 pm

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 12:42 pm

How, some information is just too much, eh?


p.s. I *saw* that.

User avatar
dadio
Posts: 4652
Joined: December 10th, 2010, 1:20 pm

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by dadio » September 18th, 2015, 3:51 pm

Colourful poem & theme. 8)

creativesoul
Posts: 4650
Joined: September 15th, 2005, 3:23 am
Contact:

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by creativesoul » September 19th, 2015, 12:38 pm

like that! nice :!:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
Posts: 8343
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by saw » September 20th, 2015, 6:05 pm

nice !......i was just fooling around with my original comment, but honestly love the flow of this....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

Post by the mingo » September 21st, 2015, 1:36 am

... but love,
honestly,
the flow
8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 24 guests