Deaf

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creativesoul
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Deaf

Post by creativesoul » March 23rd, 2017, 4:42 pm

I cannot hear
I hear the trolley rattling on the tracks
The woman on the phone cannot know
The torture of her words rolling into an unidentifiable
Sound
Apparently when you cannot identify the voice
You make too many commitments
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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revolutionR
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Re: Deaf

Post by revolutionR » March 24th, 2017, 6:38 pm

Big strangeness I hear, phony on the phone, the voice of a robot, the memory of the sounds
of San Francisco.

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the mingo
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Re: Deaf

Post by the mingo » March 25th, 2017, 8:41 am

creativesoul wrote: Apparently when you cannot identify the voice
You make too many commitments
We love predicaments - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

saw
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Re: Deaf

Post by saw » March 27th, 2017, 9:22 am

everybody wants something
from me
they call from every state
and Nepal

8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Deaf

Post by creativesoul » March 27th, 2017, 10:51 am

sleeping on the floor
for 2 more days
moving
road trip best friend and two dogs
arms hurt
look to the future
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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stilltrucking
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Re: Deaf

Post by stilltrucking » March 27th, 2017, 11:42 am

Bon Voyage 8)

Road was a refuge of
sweet solitude and anonymity
for me.

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dadio
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Re: Deaf

Post by dadio » March 29th, 2017, 3:35 am

fine poem. 8)

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Re: Deaf

Post by creativesoul » April 24th, 2017, 8:55 am

I wonder how
Mecury in retrograde can have me crazy
Over 40.00$
I have 2 days to wait
Until I can pay renters insurance
God I'm tired of hearing" just put it on your credit card"
Really?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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