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Absolution is Cool

Posted: April 13th, 2017, 10:06 am
by saw
tremors of life...
bolts of memory lane
or was that Lois ?
No it's Magma that's comin'
and she seems a little pissed

she is Greek I think or maybe
Italian, a hot mama of reflection...
REM is more than a band
it's a gateway to discovery
my gondola is from Uber

must be a modern dream I guess
so I want to resist, this Magma
wants to pull me down, she brings
a suitcase of the past, but I unpack it
to fit the Land of the Gnarly Nod

Down I go
beyond the safety of open eyes
beyond the barbed wire of status quo
I'm the tripping protagonist, the fantasy hero
I absolve myself

from all oblivious transgressions.... or otherwise

Re: Absolution is Cool

Posted: April 13th, 2017, 10:51 am
by the mingo
I'm the tripping protagonist, the fantasy hero
I absolve myself
I just love inviting myself to the madly stuff - the pie market has tanked but I always make sure I have options and I can ride a good thread right across the Adirondacks, Plattsburgh by nightfall then on to Lake Champlain - have bicycle-will travel - the fantasy hero line cracked me up as I was heading for the kitchen to freshen my coffee - yes, multitasking - my woman says I'm terrible at it because of my slacker ways - had to step over my dog too on the way to the kitchen - piece of cake - let me eat cake !

Thx for this, saw, but gotta go, I'm hauling some Hank Mobley down to the Z plus I got to post a poem + drop off a haiku at judih's joint - I'm retired but all I've done since is work work work -
the golden yrs were nowhere to be found when I got there - <* 8) *>

Re: Absolution is Cool

Posted: April 13th, 2017, 5:35 pm
by mtmynd
the mingo wrote:the golden yrs were nowhere to be found when I got there
fool's gold piled up in that cast iron pot
awaiting another rainbow to be cast
to the storms brewing in the skies..
I await in patience for that fool's wealth
to obliterate the mind's eye blacked by soot.

Re: Absolution is Cool

Posted: April 13th, 2017, 5:38 pm
by mtmynd
saw... your absolution IS cool to the touch, warm to the mind...

Re: Absolution is Cool

Posted: April 14th, 2017, 10:35 am
by saw
always pleased to spark some thought mingo, so thanx for the details...and thanx as well mtmynd.. 8)