VISITING NIMA 1967.

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dadio
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VISITING NIMA 1967.

Post by dadio » April 20th, 2017, 1:42 pm

Nima said
she was pissed off
and wanted out
of the hospital.

I was visiting her
outside on the lawn.

She was in her
nightgown
getting some sun.

What's up?
I said.

Everything
from the quacks
to the food
to the darn ants
creeping along the floor
by my bed
she said.

Aren't you allowed
out into town
or up to London?
I said.

Fuck them Benny
she said
just because my mother
put a bad word in
they don't trust me out
in case I go get a fix.

A nurse passed by
out on to the lawn
to attend to a guy
who was doing something
with his penis.

No no Henry
not out here
she said.

Nima shook her head
see what I mean
I'm a druggie
these people
are mentally ill
why am I with them?

The guy was taken back
into the ward
by the nurse.

I looked at Nima
I wouldn't get you drugs
I could tell
them that
I said.

No use Benny
they won't listen.

She lit up a cigarette
from the pack
I brought her
and I lit it
and lit one for me.

A radio played
from the open window
of the ward
a Beatle song.

We sat
and smoked
and talked more.

Henry stood flashing
by the open ward door.
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Re: VISITING NIMA 1967.

Post by saw » April 21st, 2017, 2:42 pm

like a scene from a movie 8) or page from a novel, vivid and interesting...and above all human.... 8) ....in a fashion that feels authentic
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: VISITING NIMA 1967.

Post by the mingo » April 21st, 2017, 4:07 pm

Righteous
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: VISITING NIMA 1967.

Post by dadio » April 23rd, 2017, 11:30 am

Thank you, both 8)

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