With Poems

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the mingo
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With Poems

Post by the mingo » May 16th, 2017, 2:07 pm

earth
our evil home
ball of bones
unpaid loans
a Twilight Zone

birds over the river
fifty times forbid
to be anything
but a giver

be quick
be rooted
measure love by tonnage
every day option of rapture
mind, imagination, & soul
a hushed silent sanctum
expanding hour by hour

we're on a train
we jumped at birth
no need to mourn
just ride & ride
our own private prophets
paying onward with poems
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: With Poems

Post by WIREMAN » May 16th, 2017, 7:38 pm

Bravo!!! 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: With Poems

Post by judih » May 16th, 2017, 10:29 pm

agree with mr. wire!

good one, the mingo
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Re: With Poems

Post by the mingo » May 16th, 2017, 11:11 pm

The Wireman & judih - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: With Poems

Post by mnaz » May 17th, 2017, 1:06 am

You had me at 'ball of bones'..
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Re: With Poems

Post by the mingo » May 17th, 2017, 4:42 am

Thx mnaz - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: With Poems

Post by saw » May 17th, 2017, 1:14 pm

superb... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: With Poems

Post by cmoore » May 17th, 2017, 2:07 pm

I like the quick beginning of this poem, and with poems carry on. 8)
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Re: With Poems

Post by the mingo » May 18th, 2017, 1:27 am

Thx, saw - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: With Poems

Post by the mingo » May 18th, 2017, 1:28 am

Thx, Craig - appreciate it 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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