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Post by sonofthesun » July 14th, 2017, 3:39 am

as i feed
my past.
my future
hungers.
I know
it slips
gone,
no goodbye.
and still
i waste
watch
yearn
There is no empty space

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Post by judih » July 14th, 2017, 6:05 am

as Ginsberg used to say
"Notice what you notice".

good to read you

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Post by beekay » July 14th, 2017, 9:05 am

the future river
flows quickly
under the present bridge
into the past lake

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Post by mnaz » July 16th, 2017, 7:31 pm

Sooner or later it gets down to now..

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Post by sonofthesun » July 20th, 2017, 4:43 am

each now past
bring on another

my simple yes
confounds the answer

is it good and
should that matter

the infinite beckons
its all and nothing
There is no empty space

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Post by mnaz » July 23rd, 2017, 9:28 am

The great nothing Zen universe.
Nothing and All rolled in a Ball.
I just try to rhyme sometimes...

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Post by sonofthesun » July 29th, 2017, 3:21 am

your witticism fails
their is no joke
if there is no audience
There is no empty space

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Post by mnaz » July 29th, 2017, 3:50 am

True.

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Post by sonofthesun » August 1st, 2017, 3:24 am

makin of the now
like spiders in the light
true means naught
when position points null
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Re: 9

Post by leafsailors ghost » August 3rd, 2017, 7:45 am

I, as it is the eye on reflected eye sees no others questions , then again the others eye holds the day in translation, then we have we, and so see something new,yes now.

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Post by sonofthesun » August 4th, 2017, 1:47 am

to cast out aspersions
unheralded
begets experiences
unbeknownst
connections
spiderwebs
tendrils.
to question anothers beauty
only questions ones own
prepare for repercussions
There is no empty space

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Post by sonofthesun » August 4th, 2017, 2:14 am

how to protect ones self
from an end of days
political/media masturbation
of which i am guilty
finding fault
and taking none
making wars
of simple discourse
In which I am complicit
I apologize
for being more of the problem
than the solution
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Post by sonofthesun » August 15th, 2017, 2:57 am

was it passive aggressive or did i totally misjudge the sitiation?(spelled correctly by pronunciation)
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