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Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 8:27 am
by the mingo
he took me past where the pavement ends
where the road turned to gravel
showed me where the house had stood
in 1933

the barn
the woodshed
the outhouse

long gone
nothing but forest now

he drove us out
by a different way
than we went in

to where gravel
turned to pavement
again

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 9:18 am
by saw
the historical loop of knowledge... 8)

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 11:15 am
by WIREMAN
Reclaimed by nature, all so temporary .......

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 1:53 pm
by the mingo
loop of knowledge
Ain't it the truth - when young knowledge tempted me same as it did Adam & Eve - I too feasted on that apple - these days all I want is to be free of the world's knowledge, some day, maybe tomorrow, that's the way it shall be - I won't be looking back and I won't miss none of it 8)

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 1:59 pm
by the mingo
all so temporary
And that's the truth too - thank God it is

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 14th, 2017, 2:20 pm
by sasha
walking along these old dirt roads, lined with crumbling fieldstone walls and 2nd growth forest, I sometimes find myself wondering what the view was like 100 years ago.....

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 21st, 2017, 4:38 pm
by Doreen Peri
Terrific image and short-short story. Makes the reader wonder who "he" is, why he took you there, who "us" is, and what happened afterward. I like it!

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 21st, 2017, 8:35 pm
by the mingo
Doreen Peri wrote:
October 21st, 2017, 4:38 pm
Terrific image and short-short story. Makes the reader wonder who "he" is, why he took you there, who "us" is, and what happened afterward. I like it!
Thx, Doreen, appreciate it - 8)

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 22nd, 2017, 7:53 am
by dadio
Odd the past. It can haunt like aghost. Good poem.

Re: Taking Me Past

Posted: October 22nd, 2017, 8:09 am
by the mingo
dadio wrote:
October 22nd, 2017, 7:53 am
Odd the past. It can haunt like aghost. Good poem.
Thx, Terry - appreciate it and you're right.