been wondering
if I have a style
or does everything just sound
like chainsaws up on the ridge,
rumbling noise in the distance
with an occasional crash of falling trees,
Timber !
not that it matters much
it's just that the mind likes to travel,
it's a free spirit
with lot of notions in tow
pictures of erratic thought
zooming through the solar system
planetary pieces, space junk.......
my style, cough cough
has no significance, it is a waste
of thought that could be better served
trying to save the planet
but c'mon really.....what could a messed up mind
like this do to make this all better
No....my thoughts should just stay where they are
in orbit .....................where they belong
orbit
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Re: orbit
free spirit orbits me
liked your poem alott
liked your poem alott
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Re: orbit
Yeah ya got style
Thank you for your post
Nice
Thank you for your post
Nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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I think that it is both a gift and a nightmare- to have the desire to create-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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