Kidney

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creativesoul
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Kidney

Post by creativesoul » January 21st, 2023, 6:55 am

The Chinese say
It is connected to
Unconditional love
My father used to get drunk
Stand on the table
And talk about
Unconditional love

Yeah it’s easy to talk about huh?

Sick
Sweating like I’m gonna die
But I didn’t

Sometimes” kill me now”
Is a reasonable response

But why am I still here?
Come on do tell
Who is in charge?
I have a question
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: Kidney

Post by saw » January 24th, 2023, 12:49 pm

I like this....it's a raw gut punch
nothing like honesty sometimes to interest a hungry reader
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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