Country of Rain

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the mingo
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Country of Rain

Post by the mingo » September 20th, 2023, 9:25 am

I give you my lips to look at, my teeth peeking behind them -
my neck stretched, exposed,
but I will age beyond this point
and when I do a fountain of phantoms
will arrive at the foot of your bed to be with you always

I will close my eyes and you can draw on my face
I become a large doorway, a girl sitting on a tree stump,
a baby that yawns

I stand trapped in the dark dress you gave me to wear
my wild bubbles gather on your windows

you dream of many birds
and many women dressed in white bathrobes
standing on their balconies by the river
each with one thigh showing

it is a country of rain
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Country of Rain

Post by judih » September 21st, 2023, 5:10 am

gorgeous. you paint such words. Capitalized “such”.

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Re: Country of Rain

Post by the mingo » September 22nd, 2023, 11:24 pm

Thx, judih ~*~
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Country of Rain

Post by saw » September 23rd, 2023, 11:17 am

I don't believe this mortal form is the end-all.....we are energy pure and simple......this bag of bones is more fertilizer.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Country of Rain

Post by mnaz » September 23rd, 2023, 4:33 pm

rain and winds and babies that yawn, it goes on.

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