Wintertime rhyme

[Doreen Peri]

Wintertime rhyme.
.
Wind gust. Alka-Seltzer Plus.
Brokenhearted. Dearly departed.
Home alone. Chilled to the bone.
Coffee with cream. Hot steam.
Getting by. Best try.
Freezing, sneezing,
Intermittent cry.

[saw]

Nice...captures a moment...or two.....to say this is where I'm at....has a lyrical feel

[stilltrucking]

thanks for the poem, I liked it a lot

[Doreen Peri]

It’s a terrible poem. Bad writing. Just rhyming bc I don’t know what else to do with myself. I miss being able to write. I wrote incessantly for years. Now I can’t write anything. Stupid rhyming . Terrible writing.

I miss my sister, Denise.

I miss Judih.

Death is so stupid. It’s horrible, ugly, painful. It makes no sense.

One after the other we lose people. Over and over and over.

[Doreen Peri]

Sorry guys. I’m just having a tough time.

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments!

[stilltrucking]

maybe it was stupid to you but for me it was good to read. not just saying that. I am glad you wrote it. Since judih was murdered I have been at a loss for words. My dearest friends are my siblings. I used to pray I would die before them because I could not bear the thought of losing them. Sorry for this hodge podge stream of thought. Please write more poetry. I need to read it.

[sonofthesun]

Loving our exchanges
It’s why I’m(we’re?)here
The poems don’t say it all
It’s us
Missing something taken
Her words
Connect us
Judah made me(us) better

[mnaz]

You got the rhyme and rhythm.
And Jack, well said.