Wintertime rhyme
- Doreen Peri
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Wintertime rhyme
Wintertime rhyme.
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Wind gust. Alka-Seltzer Plus.
Brokenhearted. Dearly departed.
Home alone. Chilled to the bone.
Coffee with cream. Hot steam.
Getting by. Best try.
Freezing, sneezing,
Intermittent cry.
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Wind gust. Alka-Seltzer Plus.
Brokenhearted. Dearly departed.
Home alone. Chilled to the bone.
Coffee with cream. Hot steam.
Getting by. Best try.
Freezing, sneezing,
Intermittent cry.
Re: Wintertime rhyme
Nice...captures a moment...or two.....to say this is where I'm at....has a lyrical feel
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
- stilltrucking
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Re: Wintertime rhyme
thanks for the poem, I liked it a lot ![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/icon_cool.gif)
![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/icon_cool.gif)
- Doreen Peri
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Re: Wintertime rhyme
It’s a terrible poem. Bad writing. Just rhyming bc I don’t know what else to do with myself. I miss being able to write. I wrote incessantly for years. Now I can’t write anything. Stupid rhyming . Terrible writing.
I miss my sister, Denise.
I miss Judih.
Death is so stupid. It’s horrible, ugly, painful. It makes no sense.
One after the other we lose people. Over and over and over.
I miss my sister, Denise.
I miss Judih.
Death is so stupid. It’s horrible, ugly, painful. It makes no sense.
One after the other we lose people. Over and over and over.
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Re: Wintertime rhyme
Sorry guys. I’m just having a tough time.
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments!
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments!
- stilltrucking
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Re: Wintertime rhyme
maybe it was stupid to you but for me it was good to read. not just saying that. I am glad you wrote it. Since judih was murdered I have been at a loss for words. My dearest friends are my siblings. I used to pray I would die before them because I could not bear the thought of losing them. Sorry for this hodge podge stream of thought. Please write more poetry. I need to read it.
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Re: Wintertime rhyme
Loving our exchanges
It’s why I’m(we’re?)here
The poems don’t say it all
It’s us
Missing something taken
Her words
Connect us
Judah made me(us) better
It’s why I’m(we’re?)here
The poems don’t say it all
It’s us
Missing something taken
Her words
Connect us
Judah made me(us) better
There is no empty space
Re: Wintertime rhyme
You got the rhyme and rhythm.
And Jack, well said.
And Jack, well said.
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