Get back to where you once belonged, A-Death's reject story.
Posted: March 8th, 2005, 11:09 am
I reread the first chapter and saw a depth to it that I had not seen before.
Get back, JoJo.
I read your writing about the courthouse in Calgary.LitKicks.
Wanna post that one? Maybe I can find it and I will post it. I think it's one you entered in Da Quezt, man!
I am thinking about starting a seperate thread here in "rejects" and reference to your story. Thay way we won't have to scroll down with every comment.
I can see a compelling reason to read on, now.
I guess I'd better re-read my initial reaction to it, for self-reflection, duh, what was I thinking, man?
Are you stoned, I am.
Get back, JoJo.
You ain't no throwaway child.
An by the way, don't block being expressive. Let it flow and devil be damned if yer spelling aint' perfect and you make typing mistakes an your behavior ain't alwayz rational. I don't care, but it does upset me when I think that you might be hurting, that's all.
Now I wonder what happenz in yer story.......
Chapter one deals with the bar owner and how he takes his anger out on a bum, displacement, kick the dawg, cause he forms a relationship in his head about the bums around his bar and why his son's wedding reception was somewheres ellse.
It's like empty nest syndrome. Prodigal son left home and made it else where.
Chapter two....
Get back, JoJo.
I read your writing about the courthouse in Calgary.LitKicks.
Wanna post that one? Maybe I can find it and I will post it. I think it's one you entered in Da Quezt, man!
I am thinking about starting a seperate thread here in "rejects" and reference to your story. Thay way we won't have to scroll down with every comment.
I can see a compelling reason to read on, now.
I guess I'd better re-read my initial reaction to it, for self-reflection, duh, what was I thinking, man?
Are you stoned, I am.
Get back, JoJo.
You ain't no throwaway child.
An by the way, don't block being expressive. Let it flow and devil be damned if yer spelling aint' perfect and you make typing mistakes an your behavior ain't alwayz rational. I don't care, but it does upset me when I think that you might be hurting, that's all.
Now I wonder what happenz in yer story.......
Chapter one deals with the bar owner and how he takes his anger out on a bum, displacement, kick the dawg, cause he forms a relationship in his head about the bums around his bar and why his son's wedding reception was somewheres ellse.
It's like empty nest syndrome. Prodigal son left home and made it else where.
Chapter two....