Haiku Onto You!!!!

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Haiku Onto You!!!!

Post by Dave The Dov » June 1st, 2007, 5:38 pm

Typing on the old computer
Listening to the thunder
Soon it should rain
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Post by jimboloco » June 2nd, 2007, 4:05 pm

soft wind
distant thunder
birds chirping
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by WIREMAN » June 3rd, 2007, 8:49 am

the wonder of rain
tapping endless cyberspaces
roar of distant thunder
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by stilltrucking » June 13th, 2007, 3:45 pm

Train's coming
Mournful cry
Fading now

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Post by jimboloco » June 13th, 2007, 11:17 pm

they call it an effect in physics
sound waves coming on high
sound waves passing away

forgot the name
all the same
here and there

railroad tracks in heaven
cloud tracks on earth
no traces of self remain

no moon night
lightning flashes
distant murmors of peace
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » June 14th, 2007, 1:12 am

doppler effect
doppleganger me
seeing through myself

trains passing
almost by the quater hour
like temple bells

I lay in my bed
in the quiet
hear the faint sound coming

Soothing for me
to hear it coming
and then fade away

A safe feeling
Baltimore in the forties
listening to the ship's fog horns

safe in house full of adults who loved me.
and I can't go home again.
a song for child grown old.

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