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Post by sooZen » October 13th, 2009, 11:09 am

Haiku?
a long sentence divided?
not!

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simple
simply
aha!

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five, seven, five?
who's counting?
the Japanese?

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an exercise
writing zazen
finger it out

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no fear
practice makes imperfect
wabi sabi?


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Post by Artguy » October 14th, 2009, 10:19 am

now not then
quick as a breath
dead pigeon

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Post by Diana Moon Glampers » October 14th, 2009, 12:52 pm

bird feathers
in the wind
flocking together

or maybe

bird feathers
in the wind
flock together

please pardon post edit
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Post by sooZen » October 15th, 2009, 8:44 am

autumn breeze
sparrows searching
suet time!

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fall migration
alien birds in the yard
air port stopover

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dried pomegranate husks
clean and empty
successful harvest!

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no sign
hummingbirds gone
a Mexican vacation
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Post by Artguy » October 15th, 2009, 10:08 am

Ravi
Son of John
Sax

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