autumn haiku 34

[stilltrucking]

I love haiku
it looks so easy

thanks

[stilltrucking]

Me too
trying to learn
I know very little about them
except what I have picked up on from this board and the haiku board at litkicks.

Your haiku was a very satisfying haiku experience for me.

I don't know what else I can say.

Except I am looking forward to reading more of your haiku.

I have heard you have to know the rules before you can break them. Most of my haiku, if not all of them, are too intellectual.

[joel]

a cooling stream sleeps
'neath blankets of sun and leaves;
the fish are its dreams

the fish are its dreams...

that's perfect.

[happytrails]

I like this, neo. I can't pick one part of it that is my favourite, because it is all one smooth thought. Nice.