haiku #1

Clarity.
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haiku #1

Post by happytrails » October 24th, 2010, 9:16 pm

hate is like a boil
hiding pain, till it erupts
and spreads its poison

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Re: haiku #1

Post by Doreen Peri » October 24th, 2010, 11:14 pm

ain't it the truth? a fine piece, happy!

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festered erupted
hatred spews poison venom
spreads deadly virus

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Re: haiku #1

Post by happytrails » October 25th, 2010, 7:04 am

Good one, Doreen, thanks.

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