Winter walk

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Winter walk

Post by Artguy » December 9th, 2010, 10:34 am

Crisp cerulean walk
Long city avenue in the sun
A bronze soldier
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Re: Winter walk

Post by Hollweg » December 11th, 2010, 12:44 pm

I wonder if cerulean would better describe the sky than the walk.
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Re: Winter walk

Post by Artguy » December 11th, 2010, 2:36 pm

That is the suggestion that I am walking beneath a cerulean sky
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