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Post by Shem » February 1st, 2005, 11:54 pm

red light
red light, red light
moon

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Post by stilltrucking » February 4th, 2005, 12:07 pm

red light
red light, red light
moon

that was Haiku to me, what ever that is:
in other words thanks for nothing :D
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sitting here trying to bounce haiku pixalated sylables but failed.
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Zen Driving
I will teach him to drive if it kills me
tweaked testosterone

haiku fearfull me
the appearance of things as they are
god is a door knob

rabbit darts
he swerves the wheel
perfect chance to teach

calm
slow motion
slight movement

three days no sleep
I know his night vision is shot
let him drive

sooner or later
life or death
prepare him

icey slicey feeling in gut
I ride it out
can I save him anything

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Post by jimboloco » February 4th, 2005, 5:01 pm

red light
red light, red light
moon

waiting red lite
still nite
zoom

no cops in the rear mirror
red lite still red
off i sped
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » February 5th, 2005, 2:25 pm

bunny rabbit trail
two lane road new mexico
steered around them all
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appearences of things as they are

a thousand rabbbits
so wired on caffiene i jumped
not a single crunch

so we wind down this dark twisting dipping farm to market road, I been waiting for it to happen, his startle reaction when something jumps out in front of him, we all ready done the bit where he drops a front axle tire off the edge of the pavement onto the grass, I prepared him for that, no brakes immediately ease of the gas, nothing radical just move the steering wheel about a billionith of an inch and ease back on the road.

But the small animal darting through the headlights I knew there was no substitute for experience, so naturaly when the rabbit darts from right to left he jerks the wheel way to the left, all the way over to the other lane we have crossed as I shout "Dont Do That!" he settles down. Haiku I got no haiku but I abuse this board anyway

this morning
red cloud
no red patch of open sky in cloud cover as if the fields reversed forground and back ground, then the red rim of the sun shows in opening. my biggest joy these days is to see the sunrise. a haiku jam

red light
he drives through
I ask what are you doing?

spamku

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Post by jimboloco » February 5th, 2005, 11:11 pm

red lights in rabbits eyes
red rabbits eye whites
holy rabbits red eye lights

teach him how to drive
through rabbit fields
red from sunlit dusk.
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[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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