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Post by sooZen » February 8th, 2005, 8:13 am

a flock of seagulls
in the desert bosque-
winter vacation


rain clouds
on the horizon
sky painting


haiku hunger
have a bite...
don't choke!
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by stilltrucking » February 8th, 2005, 5:23 pm

haiku wont lie
fingers count the sylables
I just read em
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Post by sooZen » February 8th, 2005, 8:26 pm

I don't count
but yet I do-
Hah! zen haiku
Freedom's just another word...



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