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Post by judih » August 6th, 2011, 5:38 am

silence surround
words tiptoe onto page
creak of floorboards

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Post by the mingo » August 6th, 2011, 9:41 am

to see
to turn away
to look back
shadow on the floor

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Artguy » August 6th, 2011, 5:09 pm

Hot coffee
Moose out the window
Pouring rain

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Post by judih » August 7th, 2011, 5:43 am

outside
band of turkeys
rain drums skylight

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Post by Arcadia » August 9th, 2011, 8:14 pm

moth & flame
tired of images
what about people?

words on screen
yellow light, cool night air
moth & flame

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Post by judih » August 10th, 2011, 4:34 am

small man
runs through rainfall
honk of ferry

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Post by the mingo » August 10th, 2011, 9:22 am

afterwards the sun
comes out
its light so loud
so very very loud

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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