Hai Lights
Hai Lights
train whistle
far away
familiar
...
dog watching
a favorite past time
presently
...
soft snores
he sleeps
I write haiku
or at least...I think I do. Hah!
SooZen
far away
familiar
...
dog watching
a favorite past time
presently
...
soft snores
he sleeps
I write haiku
or at least...I think I do. Hah!
SooZen
Freedom's just another word...
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
well, in the interests of keeping my 'shit' all in one file cabinet....I will continue here.
Please chime in anytime to my string and please try and make it a 'ku' or at least three lines that don't sound like a broken up sentence...Hah! If you can write a one line haiku, low bow from this gal. 5-7-5 is good practice if needed otherwise let her rip. . .
Spring ku
clouds on the horizon
before the sunrise
pink lining
...
old dog
tail in the air
spring!
...
on the fence
two doves snuggle-
a valentine
Please chime in anytime to my string and please try and make it a 'ku' or at least three lines that don't sound like a broken up sentence...Hah! If you can write a one line haiku, low bow from this gal. 5-7-5 is good practice if needed otherwise let her rip. . .
Spring ku
clouds on the horizon
before the sunrise
pink lining
...
old dog
tail in the air
spring!
...
on the fence
two doves snuggle-
a valentine
Freedom's just another word...
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
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