oops october ku

Clarity.
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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 19th, 2013, 12:36 am

Kabul
vortex of confusion
a chance escape

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Re: oops october ku

Post by WIREMAN » October 19th, 2013, 9:50 am

In r assets
Grip on passing wind
Right......kapoof!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 19th, 2013, 11:58 pm

whirlwind of freedom
spins to a halt
time-clock crunch

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 20th, 2013, 1:22 am

the dry fallen leaves
blown across pavements
make many scratching sounds
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 20th, 2013, 10:03 pm

out of fallen dreams
energetic fireworks
stand clear

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 21st, 2013, 3:16 am

derangement of the senses
spittle at the mouth
let me mark the sands
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 21st, 2013, 10:06 pm

dear overlord
you don't exist
stop pretending

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 22nd, 2013, 11:22 am

i woke up into
a wind that was taking
all the leaves off the trees
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 22nd, 2013, 10:45 pm

fresh aloe vera
to soothe my pain
do not disturb

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Re: oops october ku

Post by stilltrucking » October 23rd, 2013, 9:32 am

dear super ego
I pretend
I am not guilty

an und für sich

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 23rd, 2013, 10:34 pm

a chunk of sleep
conquers my whole bed
till three a.m.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 23rd, 2013, 11:51 pm

well I ...
yes but ... aw the hell with it
i'm going to bed
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by MrGuilty » October 24th, 2013, 11:44 am

dove into sleep
surfaced into the dawn
going to ride on sunshine
I used to be smart

Free Rice

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 24th, 2013, 10:35 pm

in a story
all makes no sense
till the end

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 25th, 2013, 6:33 am

:!: double Wow & Bam :!: - Thx judih 8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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