oops october ku

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Re: oops october ku

Post by MrGuilty » October 25th, 2013, 9:35 am

no story
no sense
no end

Camus Ku
make it up
as I go

Cock crows
sun rises & I type
with thoughts of surfer mike
I used to be smart

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 25th, 2013, 11:21 pm

another conference
vies for attention
on my day off

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 26th, 2013, 12:05 pm

i told the dog to
go eat his food -
- earlier leaf blowing -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by stilltrucking » October 26th, 2013, 12:13 pm

superstitious urge
to put on clean underwear
before I ride today.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by zero_hero » October 26th, 2013, 1:43 pm

the inertia of words
the physics of haiku
put a body in motion
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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 26th, 2013, 11:11 pm

a blog
your life an open book
temptation to call

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 27th, 2013, 1:46 am

into the bird-dirty night
because the word is holy
and brutal & clean
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by stilltrucking » October 27th, 2013, 12:23 pm

I turn a page
in the book of life
a soul goes free

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 27th, 2013, 11:50 pm

what?
gone?
never


word that lou reed says shalom
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6J629FITNEU

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Re: oops october ku

Post by stilltrucking » October 28th, 2013, 10:15 am

correction
I turn a page
in the book of life
a soul set free
now or then
sooner or later
never ending
music is forever

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Re: oops october ku

Post by Unk » October 28th, 2013, 1:04 pm

now we play
the song goes on
music is forever
thanks dino

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 28th, 2013, 10:54 pm

tales of a city
rip open the heart
audience weeps

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 29th, 2013, 11:13 pm

it's not morning
but somewhere in the world
dawn calls out

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Re: oops october ku

Post by the mingo » October 30th, 2013, 9:46 pm

dark roads
run thru the black night
i am on one of them
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: oops october ku

Post by judih » October 30th, 2013, 10:55 pm

virtual puzzle
arms tied behind back
caught in stream

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