sliver of moon
through the pine branches
sky pie
...
cloudless night
with fifteen stars-
city smog bank
...
train whistle
off in the distance
a perfect note
Haiku before dawn
Haiku before dawn
Freedom's just another word...
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- stilltrucking
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- Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
- Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas
dry elpaso night
before dawn
faint tree shadows on grass
Reveille and goose bumps
Daybreak in my heart
Blazing star in bare tree limbs
Clears my mind of “wore”
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Thinking about my misspellings Jimboloco, I realized some of them are from the way I pronounce words with a B’more accent. When I say war it sounds like wore, (rhymes with gore) water sounds like “warter” and I can’t even figure out how to spell oil the way I say it.
But most of the miss spells are just laziness and bad habits, even though I don’t want to be a paperback writer anymore I still should not give anyone a headache trying to decypher my spelling. Just my vanity. "Baltamoron" HL Mencken?
before dawn
faint tree shadows on grass
Reveille and goose bumps
Daybreak in my heart
Blazing star in bare tree limbs
Clears my mind of “wore”
_____________________________________________________
Thinking about my misspellings Jimboloco, I realized some of them are from the way I pronounce words with a B’more accent. When I say war it sounds like wore, (rhymes with gore) water sounds like “warter” and I can’t even figure out how to spell oil the way I say it.
But most of the miss spells are just laziness and bad habits, even though I don’t want to be a paperback writer anymore I still should not give anyone a headache trying to decypher my spelling. Just my vanity. "Baltamoron" HL Mencken?
clear city night
east wind blows
a million stars
...
in windy dawn
a doves nest
waves
...
lights of juarez
tremble in the breeze
an aleppo pine dance
ST...I know all about those pronounciation quirks. I am constantly being 'corrected' by mtmynd for saying "warsh" instead of "wash" with a long 'a'. For me, I warsh my clothes, I go to Warshington...so does my mom...it is ingrained.
Peace.
SooZen
east wind blows
a million stars
...
in windy dawn
a doves nest
waves
...
lights of juarez
tremble in the breeze
an aleppo pine dance
ST...I know all about those pronounciation quirks. I am constantly being 'corrected' by mtmynd for saying "warsh" instead of "wash" with a long 'a'. For me, I warsh my clothes, I go to Warshington...so does my mom...it is ingrained.
Peace.
SooZen
Freedom's just another word...
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- Axanderdeath
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