may ku

Clarity.
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Re: may ku

Post by the mingo » May 17th, 2014, 7:52 pm

day plucked clean out of autumn
thrown smack into the middle of May
polar deja vu
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 17th, 2014, 11:20 pm

an inch closer
to smells and noises
as neighbours awake

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 18th, 2014, 11:39 pm

collapse of yang
lost in a sea of mushrooms
feeble cry for help

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Re: may ku

Post by the mingo » May 19th, 2014, 7:17 am

come one - come all
cries for help
answered here!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 19th, 2014, 10:15 pm

sickness bids farewell
bye bye control freak
back to business

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Re: may ku

Post by silent woman » May 19th, 2014, 10:29 pm

why women want
a mystery
what she takes from him
I feel :( sad when I add to her burden
with my sarcasm

a man and a woman
husband and wife
some can some can't
beats me 8)
If you can't give me love and peace, Then give me bitter fame. — Akhmatova.

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Re: may ku

Post by the mingo » May 20th, 2014, 12:43 pm

narcissus blossoms
raising their heads above new grass
couldn't keep their mouths shut
i picked them for a lover
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 20th, 2014, 10:48 pm

humour caress
it's all a relief
after a laugh

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Re: may ku

Post by the mingo » May 21st, 2014, 12:31 pm

birds calling
south wind in new leaves
flow unidentified & undeniable
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 21st, 2014, 11:15 pm

monster
slowly nibbles at my stuff
computer virus

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 23rd, 2014, 5:45 am

how many hours?
can you count to seven?
yes and keep counting

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Re: may ku

Post by the mingo » May 23rd, 2014, 1:13 pm

going forward into the future
where we will get our toes
sutured to our foreheads
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: may ku

Post by silent woman » May 23rd, 2014, 4:54 pm

childhood confusion
between a penis and a toe
older and wiser now
If you can't give me love and peace, Then give me bitter fame. — Akhmatova.

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 23rd, 2014, 11:33 pm

along with virus
an idea, a concept
and room for more

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Re: may ku

Post by judih » May 24th, 2014, 10:42 pm

computer virus
earthquake rocks the land
coffee therapy

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