haiku june

Clarity.
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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 15th, 2014, 8:02 am

8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) ok i love it - it POPS says the Caps Lock!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by judih » June 15th, 2014, 11:06 pm

a breath and a thought
sudden appearance of you
two souls connect

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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 16th, 2014, 10:29 pm

it's the late hours
but things draw breath -
and other connections
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: haiku june

Post by judih » June 16th, 2014, 10:52 pm

the big day comes
then goes and then
another day

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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 17th, 2014, 9:43 am

going by a puddle left by the rain
bending down
scooping up the moon
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by judih » June 17th, 2014, 11:08 pm

are you alive?
breath, pulse, mindwaves
affirm and proceed

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Post by judih » June 18th, 2014, 11:12 pm

a seed of fear
tossed in the mind
gets nipped in the bud

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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 19th, 2014, 12:14 pm

i hate death
mostly because
of the spaces it creates
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: haiku june

Post by judih » June 19th, 2014, 11:13 pm

in response
logic sometimes wins
worth a try

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Re: haiku june

Post by judih » June 21st, 2014, 1:01 am

full body response
a smile spreads to toes
and jumps to laughter

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Post by judih » June 21st, 2014, 11:10 pm

would i delete
if i could click and remove?
how could i risk it?

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Re: haiku june

Post by judih » June 22nd, 2014, 11:04 pm

alone
she walks among friends
distance increases

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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 23rd, 2014, 8:57 pm

twilight -
the rain they said would come
never did
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: haiku june

Post by judih » June 23rd, 2014, 11:13 pm

words appear
make a connection
invisible stitch

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Re: haiku june

Post by the mingo » June 24th, 2014, 9:58 pm

God has given us companions
for love sure but more -
to teach of value
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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