July haiku

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 16th, 2015, 8:54 pm

judih and coffee
morning tryst in the kitchen
let's forget the news
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: July haiku

Post by the mingo » July 17th, 2015, 12:56 pm

waiting arrivals
sunlight & shadow
empty bench
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 17th, 2015, 2:35 pm

old timer napping
the bench was so inviting
snores chase the pigeons
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: July haiku

Post by judih » July 18th, 2015, 5:59 am

a big day
many impressions
line up in the wings

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 18th, 2015, 2:32 pm

great notions on tap
open the faucet widely
mind gushes with ease
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: July haiku

Post by judih » July 19th, 2015, 5:31 am

what surprise?
no surprise!
my dad keeps secrets

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 19th, 2015, 8:45 am

just watched lolita
dad was a strange character
they both had big secret
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Re: July haiku

Post by 68degrees » July 19th, 2015, 4:52 pm

my dad kept secrets
although I never asked him
to repeat any

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Re: July haiku

Post by judih » July 20th, 2015, 6:19 am

one day
this day
no fairy tales

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Re: July haiku

Post by 68degrees » July 20th, 2015, 10:29 am

never enough time
for those times to mean something
oh shit yet again

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Re: July haiku

Post by the mingo » July 20th, 2015, 12:25 pm

day after the rain
rain puddle reflects the sky
it came from
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 20th, 2015, 5:17 pm

see the universe
head pointing to the mirror
I need not look up
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: July haiku

Post by judih » July 21st, 2015, 4:33 am

after he goes
whispers of his heart
linger

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Re: July haiku

Post by saw » July 21st, 2015, 1:15 pm

bouquet of cologne
left in the afternoon air
inhale the man's past
If you do not change your direction
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Re: July haiku

Post by the mingo » July 21st, 2015, 7:07 pm

after he goes
whispers of his heart
linger
... I really liked this, judih - thx
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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