on taking Haiku seriously

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on taking Haiku seriously

Post by sooZen » April 6th, 2005, 8:13 am

I am haikuku
hai equals fun
hai yes!

...

empty sky
before the dawn
unseen moon

...

bug bodies
splatter the windshield
bleary eyed view

...

moon rise
just a sliver
a slice of night

...

wind storm
on interstate 10
blows!


...

writting haiku
reading haiku
being haiku
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by Dave The Dov » April 6th, 2005, 3:08 pm

Seeing haiku
Breathing haiku
Eating haiku
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Post by mousey1 » April 6th, 2005, 3:47 pm

Haikuist
Acupuncturist
Heal thyself
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by e_dog » April 11th, 2005, 7:13 pm

why 'ku?
try 'ku.

(thanku very much.)

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Post by stilltrucking » April 12th, 2005, 7:48 am

thank ku
deversion from
my selfish world

haiku breeze
shatters belljar
a breath of fresh air

haiku steers true course
for sailing towards the sunrise
the beautiful now

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Post by jimboloco » April 12th, 2005, 8:41 am

one word
wind

two words
blue sky

three words
fly a kite

blue sky
windy
kite flying
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » April 12th, 2005, 8:48 am

wind song
live oak limbs sway
spring time

the earth spins
within the cacoon
web of man's desire

change is in the air
who can see it now
a peacefull valley

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Post by jimboloco » April 12th, 2005, 9:09 am

i ching
changes coming
april may june
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » April 12th, 2005, 9:29 am

under the sun
Basho's shadow
still there

puckered up in TX
phluncked a test at work
u tell me what telophone

one more try
at multiple choice
or back to rosewater

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the rosewater foundation
Hellow this Is jack
may I help you

so
i putter with puter
and not face the music

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Post by mousey1 » April 12th, 2005, 11:30 am

Haiku
Haichoo
Thankyou

(
Do I defile
Haiku
?
)
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by Dave The Dov » April 12th, 2005, 1:09 pm

The rosewater foundation
How intresting
What is it
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Post by stilltrucking » April 12th, 2005, 2:25 pm

sneezy wheezy
rodent sniffles
slick as snot

my tongue moist
soup in crock pot
erotic cabbages

Homey blue collor smell
hamhocks so cheap
at home feeling

now I can face my fears
lunar silver
just trying to make an honest dollar.

now doze were what I would call ku defiled.

you always had such a noble way of dealing with secreteions, every time my rose of alamo come to see her working class hero she brought me clean hankies, and dental floss.

de ku
defiled?
oh no.

probably every thing I know about ku I got from one book, one website, and a couple of friends. this just a foolish garden where some practice getting it, by not getting it at all

rock on sister 8)

dave the rosewater thing a refference to god bless you mr. rosewater by old kurt.

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Post by jimboloco » April 16th, 2005, 5:18 pm

no, it's his home based telephone advisory service
named for alamo rose
he's making that up about his borrowing from that writer,
you know, the bombardier in ww2,
now anti-massacree, anti-imperialist, the guy with guts, von gutt,
because he is modest and private at heart,
an entrepreneurial antidisestablishmentarian.

knowing what i don't
i should shut up
kwatz!
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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