Trevku's

[Trevor]

Yeah I guess technically none of these are Haikus, then again technically I'm not a good writer..lol



Human

spring from earth
more loose than stone
more firm than dirt.



Lightning

Eclectic, electric,
Brilliant bright booms.
Night veins feign destruction.



Masterbation

I handle my pen
spilling onto the paper
my seed kills the tree.



The icicle

a hanging prisoner
drips tears
toward freedom.



Nothing Profound to Say About Fucking in Three Lines

flesh snare snaps rythmic claps
reddening thighs clasp
shafts of cock balls slap.



Breakfast in Bed

Beneath the lid
an egg boils impatiently
waiting for the harden.

[stilltrucking]

freud's breakfast
two over easy
passive sex a pain



they were all good, but one hit me hardest.

Maybe the lest beautiful one of the bunch go figure.

this one I like the best for what I feel a ku should do for me.

Human

spring from earth
more loose than stone
more firm than dirt.

[mousey1]

Kudos!!!!!!!!

These are Koochie Kus!!!!!!

Hoochie Koochie Kus!!!!!

Coochie Coochie Kus!!!!

And in plain English....for those who don't speak Kudonese.......

EXCELLENT!!!!!! each and every one.

My favorites:

"Masterbation" - dripping with intensity and oozing humor

"The icicle" - also dripping, and gripping....possibly my fav favorite!

"Breakfast in Bed" - as golden as the hardened yolk!

(Stop me if you heard all this before)

I gotta say I know nothing of what makes a true Haiku, but these are haiqualitykus in my hais.

Thanks for the reading.

I bet you do limericks too!


KuKukatchoo Mr. Robinson!

[Trevor]

Truck'n,

Thanks for your comments...I kinda liked what you came up with as well:

freud's breakfast
two over easy
passive sex a pain


Mousey,

You crack me up! I gotta ask, Where on earth do you get all that energy from?...lol

Thanks for your comments, glad you liked them

[mousey1]

I gotta ask, Where on earth do you get all that energy from?...lol

It comes in pints

Imbibed one at a time

Large pints

Quarts even!!!!

Hiccup!

'Scuse me....

Gotta go

Enough of this lol ing about.